Quick Intro:
I was getting kind of bored when I was writing something with no plot for the blog posts. So, here's a little something that I whipped together. Hope you guys like it. :)
American
Girl Dolls and Stains
“No, Sally, that's not her.”
“You don't believe me? Can't you see
the similarities?”
I steal another glance at at the girl
behind my table and consider the possibility. She has the same eyes,
minikin hands, and dazzling smile. But no, it couldn't be. That girl
is long gone.
“Just go over there and introduce
yourself. See what happens, maybe you two will reunite your childhood
love and become the couple of the century!” Sally explodes as she
throws her hands in the air.
I straighten my herculean back and
begin to walk to my table when I notice My. Kenley staring daggers in
my direction. I quicken my pace.
Carly? She sounds so different.
Older, more sophisticated, much more developed. But it can't be. How
long had it been? 10 years? Did she just laugh? I'd recognize that
laugh anywhere. It is her.
I only know Carly
as a tomboy. American Girl Dolls, she never owned one. Pants, they
all had grass stains. Heck, she was the opposite of feminine. She was
puerile. Childish. She was my type of gal.
“No kidding,
Carly!” I say to interject myself into the conversation. Carly
observes me with her dark eyes and continues to express her thoughts
to her partner.
That
was stupid, Kevin. You should at least know what they're talking
about before you open your mouth again. You can't mess this up!
“Wait,
did you just call me Carly?” the girl blurts with a sound of
surprise. “Do I know you?” she asks with suspicion.
Yes!
This is what you've been waiting for, Kevin! Stop staring at her!
Answer her!
“Uhh,
yeah. I'm Kevin! Kevin Jackson! Do you remember me?”
Please
remember me.
Her
pretty eyes squint and her brows knit while trying to search for the
memory. She is trying to envisage me and I can tell. I have seen that
face before. The memory is crystal clear.
Velvet
and Dimples
“Mom, I wanna go
home. Let's do this another time,” I plead. The small package
suddenly feels awkward in my hands. It is a struggle to keep my
fingers around the velvet box.
“Another day.
Please?” I try one last time.
“Come on,
Kevin,” my mother rationalizes. “You spent your own money on it
for her. And we're practically here. You can do it,” she reassures
me.
“Go, Kewin!” my little sister cheers from her pink car seat as cheerios fly from her small fists.
“Go, Kewin!” my little sister cheers from her pink car seat as cheerios fly from her small fists.
I
can't do this. How do I get out of this? Should I pretend to be sick?
Pass out? Wow, I can't believe I did this. Wait, it's worth it.
Carly. She's worth it.
“Hurry
up, Mom!” I demand with determination.
Wait.
What if she's not home? Or what if she doesn't like it? Or
what if she's sleeping? Should I wait there? Or should I leave it on
the kitchen table? Why didn't I bring a card? Should I have picked
her a flower too? She likes the white ones.
“Out
of the car, Kevin! I'll get Sarah,” my mom says.
I carefully
unbuckle my seat belt and open the clunky doors of the white min-van.
The sunshine on my face gives me confidence and the sweet air gives
me courage. Suddenly, the small
package doesn't feel so awkward anymore. I can do this.
package doesn't feel so awkward anymore. I can do this.
I can't do
this.
My mom
holds out her hand for support and I reject it. It is time to be a
man. I lead the way up to Carly's porch and ring the doorbell with
confidence.
Breathe in.
Breathe out.
“Oh, hi,
Mrs. James. Is Carly here?” I ask in a small voice when she opens
the door.
A smile spreads
across her face as she yells for her daughter.
Oh. My. Gosh.
Here she comes. I can hear her. What if I mess up? What if I-
“Kevin?
What are you doing here?” Carly asks as she slithers her way
between her mom and younger sister. Instantly, her eyes dart to the
box in my hands.
What's that
look? Is she confused? Mad? Sad? Happy?
“Kevin
has something to give you,” my mother says in a matter-of-fact
tone.
A silly smile
spreads across my face and I looked from Carly to my towering mother.
Help.
“Here,” I say
as I clumsily handed the box to Carly. From my position on the porch,
I watch Carly finger the velvet box. The air conditioning of the
house sends chills up my back and I inhale in. And for some unknown
reason, I have a huge smile on my face.
Finally, after
Carly finishes inspecting the box, she pries it open. I saw her eyes
squint and her brows knit as a look of confusion cross her face. But
only for a second. A silly smile that highlights her tan dimples
appears on her face as she looks up.
The next few
weeks, she wore the diamond ring everyday. I only knew this because
my mom told me. According to her, she showered with it on.
Start
of Something New
“Kevin?” Carly
asks with a hint of recognition on her lips.
“Yeah!” I
smile back.
She remembers.
“What are you
doing here?” Carly asks as if questioning my intentions.
“Learning,” I
reply with a laugh. “What are you doing here?”
“Learning,”
Carly shoots back with a sparkle in her eye.
This is a bit confusing, but I will assume that your freedom as a writer is worth it. Do all three connect together? or only the last two? The middle one was probably my favorite, even though i was unsure of the characters relation to each other was. In a way, this held my attention better; I wanted to figure out what was going on bad enough that I did not realize how much I had read. Your writing was defiantly engaging enough, and you developed your main characters well.
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